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    Whose Palms

    A searing meditation on black labour, memory, exile, and civilisation.

    By: Kabedoopong Piddo Ddibe'st

    09 May, 2026

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    Whose palms—
    tell me—whose palms
    kneaded the clay of dawn
    and lifted suns into stone?

    Whose mother's blood
    rose, hardened,
    stood upright—
    breasted into pyramids—whose?

    Speak.

    The pyramids—
    who suckled their shadows
    on the black milk of the earth?

    Who planted their ribs
    in the mute throat of my sweat,
    in the bitter grammar
    of my brow—who?

    Whose ancestors,
    spines bent into question marks,
    were taught by the whip
    to write history
    on their own salted backs?

    Who weeded the cloves of blood
    that sweetened the tongue of
    Zanzibar—whose?

    Whose great-great-grandfather
    weeded the cloves of blood
    that watered the soil of Zanzibar?

    Answer me.

    Whose bodies floated,
    face-up like broken mirrors,
    on the salted amnesia of oceans—whose?

    Whose tongue sang psalms
    into the wrinkled face of Babylon,
    lullabies of civilisation stitched
    with gunpowder and teeth—
    whose mourning was that music?

    Which genius, unnamed, unburied,
    from the black halls of servitude,
    wrists shackled to centuries,
    balanced the trembling spine of the world
    upon his shoulders—
    Held the ancient worlds
    on their shoulders—
    lifted the glories of imperial Rome—which?

    and held—
    held—
    held—

    the fevered hallucination of empires,
    lifted Rome
    like a drunk god
    from dust into dominion—
    whose hands dared that godhood?

    Say it.

    They will say:
    your black palms.

    My palms—

    my black cracked constellations,
    drought-beaten maps of forgotten gods,
    lumps
    that burned without oil
    of apology
    at the frontline of progress.

    My palms—
    the lamps
    of learning in the vanguard of progress...

    I am the wick,
    the wound
    that gave it light.

    White flecks erupted
    from the black fire of my skin—
    ash or angels—
    no history could tell.

    White specks from black fires,
    storks of the winds,
    unfolded scrolls of good tidings—
    Wind smuggled them,
    thin-winged messengers,
    preaching the wind sermons—
    writing me into shrines
    of strange tongues
    that could not pronounce my name.

    A direct divination of myself—

    I climbed.

    I climbed the iron spine of progress,
    its long body tightening
    its alphabet around my breath.
    Climb the great train of progress,
    a python...

    I cough verses
    that invoke the spirit of Christopher Okigbo
    reciting the rosary of funeral dirges
    in the plantation of fermented incantatory
    rhythms,

    Niyi Osundare—

    Ah, what heaps of praise poems
    have we fermented this dawn
    of the new day?

    Go forth,
    Let Tchicaya U Tam'si know
    I, too, drink fire, the mystic spirit
    of the sleeping predecessors…

    I spit this poem
    into the pots of relics of the gods
    of Kongo and Mwanamutapa
    on the lactating breasts of Timbuktu
    my ancestors sang to,
    the lullabies that quieted suns.

    I crossed in overloaded canoes,
    my ribs arguing with water,
    my dreams leaking
    into a wind drunk on departure—
    Overloaded canoes
    bursting in the flowering wind—

    until...

    time cracked its knuckles,
    and a voice older than thunder
    summoned me:

    My son—

    O my son, O my son!
    Let me remind you:

    Do you not know?

    It is your blood—
    your black, unburied argument—
    that fell from your dismantled back,
    that baptised these rivers,
    that fattened the fields of men
    into obscene abundance.

    It is your blood, your black blood
    that rained from your bleeding bent black back,
    that poured these rivers of blood
    that irrigate the fields of men.

    I stood still.

    The world ate without prayer.

    And now—

    roll up your bed of sorrow—
    Fold your borrowed dreams—
    Gather your scattered name
    from the mouths that chewed it.

    Roll up your dying bed,
    pack it—
    Go home.

    Go home—
    back home,
    where I buried your umbilical cord.

    About the author

    Kabedoopong Piddo Ddibe'st is a distinguished Ugandan poet, author, teacher, and a literary editor. Born and raised in Northern Uganda, Kabedoopong has dedicated his life to exploring and addressing themes of identity, politics, and the human condition through his writing. As a writer, he has made significant contributions to the literary world, with his poetry and prose featured in numerous international magazines, newspapers, and anthologies. Kabedoopong is the author of The Bridge Between ( previously titled 'A Bridge Without the River'), a traditional 'written-oral epic' poem that looks into the complex relationship between power and community. His upcoming novel, A Wreath for Flies, is a poignant narrative exploring themes of corruption, land grabbing, and the resilience of the human spirit, centered on Komakec, a young man navigating the struggles of rural life and political deceit. In addition to his literary pursuits, Kabedoopong is the founder of The Blaque Mirror, an online poetry magazine dedicated to uplifting Black voices and fostering dialogue on themes such as culture, identity, and politics. He is also an English Language and Literature teacher where he inspires the next generation of thinkers and leaders. Kabedoopong’s works are known for their satirical edge, profound use of paradox, and unwavering commitment to addressing the realities of life in Uganda and Africa at large. Through his artistry, he continues to give voice to the voiceless, highlighting the resilience and beauty of the human spirit. He currently resides in Uganda and can be reached at [email protected]

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